Blog #3

The focus on the essay to me was to introduce technology in a good way and the negative way. I choose to construct my essay in the way that i give a fair response in a good way and the bad way about technology. I didnt take my time when i wrote the essay. I do like the ideas where i am going with it but i do have to expand it and by expanding it i am getting more ideas about the same things but in a more depth way. I didnt do the peer editing online but i like the face to face editing where i can see the person if they really want to help me or are they just writing on my blog because they have too.